just a quick update to show you what i've been working on today! in my feedback session i realised that from afar the white title text sunk into the green background so it wasn't really legible, and also the monkey sunk into the floor because the two colours were too similar. other feedback was that the monkey and the table looked too 'static' and that the image and text had equal prominence on the page and perhaps one needed to take dominance over the other.
so, in response to my feedback, i've worked on the title text and composed a text arrangement which i
think is more effective than the previous one, changed up the colours that were sinking into one another and i've given the monkey and the table a slightly more dynamic angle. i don't think i've quite tackled the image/text hierarchy issue yet, but i'm still unsure about which i want to take precedence.
that's all for now!
I quite like it! The colours don't sink in and each bit stands out. However I feel the 'Don't lose your head, wear a helmet instead!' should be larger as it's quite important?
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